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    A Song (I wrote)

    As you might know, I was on a mission trip for the past 10 days. On this trip I met a girl. Things didn't end so well for some reason unknown to me, but the good times inspired me to write a song

    I was a hopeless man with just my dreams
    I had no one, I had nothing,
    at least until the day that I met you

    I saw you walk in through the door
    Your shining smile made my heart soar
    I knew from that moment forth
    that I
    would be
    yours

    I won't forget that Tuesday night,
    when we held hands it felt so right
    was the sweetest moment of life

    Life was grand and so were you
    I'd do anything you'd ask me to
    just 'cause the way I felt when you close

    But soon the end was drawing near
    and my deepest, darkest fear
    was coming true the way I knew it would

    We both knew it couldn't last
    but I never thought it would go so fast
    before you and I parted ways

    I will never see you for the rest
    of time, maybe for the best
    so I can keep the memories short and sweet

    I don't know if you'll remember me
    but forgetting you's an impossibility
    I guess that makes this goodbye
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    aww I'm sorry about the not working out w/ the girl part, but the song was really good...
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    Okay. Here is what I say. When you have to leave fnet... no matter how crappy the stuff gets with your family, you have my direct orders to write and write and write. Just do it. Every day. Sometimes you write the best when you're at your worst. Just keep at it. Fill up pages and pages, or documents and documents, whatever. And when this is over, you'll be glad you did. Because you'll have basically just recorded all of your feelings, AND wrote some really decent stuff. Hell, you could try to get something published by then...


    But, um, rant aside, I like the song.


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    Hey Timo,
    I can sympathize with you mate. When I left australia last summer I left behind a someone who I too cared deeply for. If you want to talk to anyone who understands how you feel I'm here.
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