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Old 07-18-2001, 05:14 AM   #1
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I didn't see Space's latest contribution after all the hub-bub. I just want to tell you, Space, that what you wrote did NOT offend me. In fact, I laughed like crazy at it. You had the sense enough to write it properly.

I will go on to say that G.W. would have had a good thing going if he would have kept the sexual stuff out of it (a visit to whipsnchains.com is one thing, but explaining actual sexual acts is a whole other beast).

If you want to be respected as a writer, that respect must be earned. Writing angry, pornographic material about a person others seem to care about, then attacking & assaulting others, is not a way to become respected. A couple of the students that I help teach (one is a 13 year old girl) have visited this site. I do NOT want her seeing such things. Especially after I told her mother this is a good place.

That said, I respect Space. He's been a jerk at times, but he's also clever & tells some FUNNY stories that I get such a kick out of. Space, I hope you continue your version of my "holiday" (as long as it's PG), because it has really been appreciated.
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"I will go on to say that G.W. would have had a good thing going if he would have kept the sexual stuff out of it (a visit to whipsnchains.com is one thing, but explaining actual sexual acts is a whole other beast)."

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This is an out-right lie!

There are no sexual discriptions in the final version that I edited immediately at your request. I already admitted that the original was crossing some lines, but I took care of it. The edited version has at worst a forced kiss. You had already written yourself as a quivering chained captive.

You thanked me and that should have been the end of it. PERIOD! Unfortunately you have allowed this to get way out of hand. I think that you should end this.



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"I will go on to say that G.W. would have had a good thing going if he would have kept the sexual stuff out of it (a visit to whipsnchains.com is one thing, but explaining actual sexual acts is a whole other beast)."

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This is an out-right lie!

There are no sexual discriptions in the final version that I edited immediately at your request. I already admitted that the original was crossing some lines, but I took care of it. The edited version has at worst a forced kiss. You had already written yourself as a quivering chained captive.

You thanked me and that should have been the end of it. PERIOD! Unfortunately you have allowed this to get way out of hand. I think that you should end this.

Ummm, it's DEAD obvious what supposedly happens between Moon and myself. You said, "Moon got the works." How DARE you even say THAT! That is not part of our story, or a nice thing to say. Even when we disagreed with other members on things, at least none of us did anything vulgar as you have. My 9 year old enjoys knowing the stories...and do you want my 9 year old to read that Mommy's character has sex with ANYONE, let alone Mommy's best friend? Shame on you.




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G.W. You did see the use of the word "had", did you not? I used an illustration from former events to draw a parallel to something current, that being the desire to have Space join us again.
And yes, I did thank you for removing the highly offensive material. I will do so again. Thank you for changing it.

For me to say you would have "had" a good thing going without the sex, it was not a lie. It was the truth. I liked your story. None of this would have happened if it remained within the boundaries of a decent line. I do respect you for removing what you did, though.

Please, everyone...let's just get on with it. G.W. & Space, you ARE good writers. Please stay. Let's just not set out to purposely hurt one another again. Okay? Please? It's been fun. Let's keep it that way.

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I'm sick of people on this site taking the Lord's name in vain. It happens all the time here, and nobody says anything.

It's a sad sad world that we live in.
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hey George.. where do you get the idea about her takeing the Lords name in vain?? she didn't even say anything that comes close to that... so whats up with that??
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