05-17-2001, 06:03 PM
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| My goodness, such talented people here. I am SOOOOOO impressed! Really!
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05-17-2001, 06:42 PM
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| Moonitic - If you review, would you be so kind as to look over what I have so far? I'm working on what I hope will be a full-length book.
What have you written? Do you have a site? I'd love to be able to read some of it.
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"You can run, but you'll only die tired". -Michael Anson
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05-17-2001, 07:54 PM
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| Moon:
Bravi... Bravi... Bravisimi!!!! | |
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05-18-2001, 05:09 AM
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| Sword, et al
My official website is www.marygibbs.com. My book information is there. I don't have the other things I've done listed right now. I just got the domain, & have to work on things as I have time.
If you want me to critique your story, email me at moonitic@aol.com, & we'll talk about it.
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05-18-2001, 06:11 AM
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| Cadet ą Space
[This message has been edited by space_cadet (edited 05-30-2001).]
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05-18-2001, 06:29 AM
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| Then go do something else & leave the people who are having fun to their game, space. There's no point to your snotty attitude, except to get attention. It's getting old. If you don't like it, DON'T READ THE THREADS! Why ruin it for others?
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05-18-2001, 08:22 AM
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| Im a King, a lover , a fighter, not a writer.Hey, sounds like that female rock star....what was her name Alanis Morsette(sp)
I try at least to possess, heart, imagination, style, and a healty love of fantasy. If my occassional bad grammer and spelling can inspire the imagination of others then so be it. Life as we know it, in the real world ,is accepting the
good and the bad. Every person is somewhat like a double edged sword.... sharp and dull.....good and evil....talent and imperfection........
happy and sad. We try and show the sharper side to Society but on that back swing the duller side is seen. Arcon is not perfect.
Arcon is just Arcon.
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05-18-2001, 08:36 AM
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| Hey Space, Maybe your eyes are just to green my man......... Remember when i said you probaly crunch numbers and look up definitions? You,re right im wrong. You're
an editor! So ......Im making you Arconia's
official " Chief Editor".
So edit away man!!!!!!!!!!! go back through
all the post and find errors all day every day for the rest of your life.
Take them to Zelda and she'll give you a penny for each and every one of them.'
Hey, by the year 3067 you can retire in style............go for it dude.........
The arcon, the King, arcon of arconia,
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.................arcon the misspeller(hehehe)
yesssssssssssss im on a roll....
Space, people like you make it all worthwhile
Just to have a little relief from ya....see ya...
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05-18-2001, 09:50 AM
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#29 | | Quit (no longer with us)
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| maybe arcon has dyslexia. the story isn't bad so far, but once again, as i noted before, arcon has gone bonkeres, and i feel that having a "mad king" [go back to hamlet], we should perhaps limit his role, although it would be difficult to do since everyone is allowed to write anything on the board. we should use convincing ways: lalalalala
fa la la...
arcon has a good heart,
i can tell, arcon is one that smart,
he is swell,
but if arcon does too mucccccchhhhhh,
it will come out all in a rushy-bunnnnnncccch
and we won't be able to defend the KINGDOM!
[also i forgot what does mango do in the kingdom, can she have a social role?] | |
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05-18-2001, 10:47 AM
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| mango, when HASN'T arcon been bonkers? That's part of his charm!
Lady Moon of the Quill
...secretly written & transmitted from her fencingsucks prison.
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05-18-2001, 05:48 PM
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| Quote:
Originally posted by Rick:
Moon:
Bravi... Bravi... Bravisimi!!!! | <sigh> Images of Michael Crawford singing in Phantom of the Opera flashing through my mind. Where did I put that CD? Now, I must refresh my soul by listening to the soothing and wild music of this fine musical score. As for my friend, Moonitic, her muse is here in full force in this incredible Song of Arconia!
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05-18-2001, 07:48 PM
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#32 | | Senior Member
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| From Lady Moon:
Tis a good thing I found such a dimwit guard. It makes communication somewhat easier. My mind is too muddled to link with Willow at this time.
It seems that another force has taken an interest in me. The evil Pub-Lisher. They have stolen my muse & refuse to give it back. Yes, we have a contract (I was a fool to fall for their charms), but they have been conducting VERY poor business. Such CADS! They have contacted me to force me to solicit myself for my muse, with only a mere pittance as payment.
Tis a dark, dark day in the homeland of Lady Moon.
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11-09-2001, 06:36 AM
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| Hey Moon, thanks again for writing this.
King Arcon | |
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11-09-2001, 10:44 AM
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| hmmmmmmmmmmm I wonder if Steve could set this to music? Hey Steve! Are you out there?
Arcon of Arconia | |
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11-09-2001, 11:39 AM
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|  i really don't like what i wrote earlier, however, i can only think that someone drove me to writing it. if the webmaster would remove the offending verse, i would appreciate it. | |
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11-09-2001, 11:51 AM
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#36 | | Senior Member
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| For some reason it just feels right to post
#1900 within the (Song of Arconia) thread.
I salute you Moon. Thanks.
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11-09-2001, 12:15 PM
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| Yay! A party at the Bitter End Drinks on me!. . .wait Moon is lost in the woods, and so is our king. Scratch that just a simple Yay!
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