Reivew of the Masked Ball

[its_me_mango]

Not a bad start. It stalled around page three (that would be 3:00 a.m.) but picked up after a few turns around the room. Mango introduced new life into the ball, by dusting off the fiddles, but then it flagged. Sorry, but this party gets an A for effort, but a C for the production it lacked the same lustre from such luminous quarters as Moon, Zelda, Arcon, Dame and, yes, even tell-urine.

[DamedEscrime]

Wow! I got mentioned...hmmm.

[lochinvar]

I guess I'm just chopped liver...

[Willow]

My friend Loch could NEVER be "just chopped liver." Loch, you are VERY important. And, we need to know how hurt you are! We need you, buddy!

[lochinvar]

Uh...so, if you put four Luminous Quarters together, does it make one Luminous Dollar?

[Moonitic]

Mango dear, when you start paying me for my writing, you can critique it. I have other, more pressing issues to tend to right now.

[lochinvar]

Willow:

I detailed all the injuries in the After the Collapse thread.

I'll leave it up to all of you as to how serious or life-threatening any one of them is...

Though I must add the caveat that I won't be very happy if you decide that I'm crippled for life.

[arcon]

Mango, Who said you could end the ball?

I stated we would get back to it after the fight.

I will let Arconians decide NOW if they wish to go back.

The announcements that were intended to take place at the ball will be done in their own specific threads ...should Arconians decide the ball is over.

The next time i declare there is a function Ill be the one to end it.
Either myself or Zelda.

Arcon of Arconia

[ 09-19-2001: Message edited by: arcon ]

[its_me_mango]

I guess I'm just chopped liver - no you're not, sorry, i was hasty.

My review is in progress and unless it picks up soon you'll get a D Arcon, sorry, you excellency, i didn't mean to overstep my role as a mere dredge in this effort.