10-19-2004, 11:36 AM
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#21 | | Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 2003
Posts: 4,091
| "I would rather die
On my feet," said a fighter,
"than live on my knees." | 
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10-19-2004, 11:57 AM
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#22 | | Senior Member
Join Date: May 2003 Location: UK
Posts: 1,565
| I've never been shot
I don't intend to start now
That's my two penn'orth
I'm bored with this subject. Back to haikus about the person above!
Soldier should smile more
On each pic I've seen of him
He looks serious
Smiling is good for
You. It makes other people
Happy too, you know
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"I grew up in Europe, where the history comes from" [Eddie Izzard]
"she might not look like much, kid, but she's got it where it counts"
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10-19-2004, 12:09 PM
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#23 | | Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 2003
Posts: 4,091
| Louweasel may smile
But I have no way to know
We see half her face | |
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10-19-2004, 12:34 PM
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#24 | | Senior Member
Join Date: May 2004 Location: U.S. of F-ing A.
Posts: 1,926
| how on the earth
do you do these damn
Haiku things?
I can't quite seem
to ever, ever get them
someone explain? 
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10-19-2004, 04:25 PM
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#25 | | Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Boston, MA
Posts: 5,043
| They come natural
Others must try very hard.
Patience is the key!
Last edited by telkanuru; 10-19-2004 at 05:24 PM.
Reason: bad meter. I was being ironic, honest.
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10-19-2004, 04:55 PM
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#26 | | gother than thou
Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Atlanta, GA
Posts: 861
| Both guys above me
did not use five, seven and
five in their attempts. | |
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10-19-2004, 05:02 PM
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#27 | | Senior Member
Join Date: May 2000 Location: The Reflecting God
Posts: 4,002
| Tool of the Devil
Points the truth to those above
A wise man is he
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A WINNER IS YOU! | |
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10-19-2004, 07:52 PM
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#28 | | Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Charlotte, NC area
Posts: 2,501
| Don't know much about
Late Night, but tool' is very
Strange to get to know.
Poor, poor Hillbilly
Must have been to public school
Didn't learn haikus. | |
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10-19-2004, 08:10 PM
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#29 | | Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 2003
Posts: 4,091
| I know not the 'gal
But the Devil's Tool is wrong;
Telk had the meter | |
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10-19-2004, 09:13 PM
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#30 | | Senior Member
Join Date: May 2000 Location: The Reflecting God
Posts: 4,002
| Alas it is so
I know not the fencer girl
but Fixx My I do
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10-19-2004, 09:17 PM
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#31 | | gother than thou
Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Atlanta, GA
Posts: 861
| Telk is a cheater
He edited his haiku
to proper meter. | |
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10-19-2004, 09:27 PM
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#32 | | Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 2003
Posts: 4,091
| He is no cheater
Who corrects his errency
When he perceives it | |
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10-19-2004, 09:28 PM
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#33 | | Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: MA
Posts: 7,519
| Quote: |
Originally Posted by mrbiggs Mrbiggs ought to
go to bed ASAP
fencing.net is crack | Mrbiggs is dumb.
That last line has four beats
And the meter sucks.
Your screenname is long.
Too long to fit in haikus.
So I won't say it. | 
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10-19-2004, 09:29 PM
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#34 | | Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: MA
Posts: 7,519
| Now I look stupid.
Soldier beat me to the punch.
The post made no sense. | |
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10-21-2004, 06:18 AM
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#35 | | Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Boston, MA
Posts: 5,043
| Nonsense is sense when
some sense is sometimes sensed in
some sort of sense, so... | |
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