09-01-2005, 02:20 PM
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| The modern day David and Goliath??
The sun did set, and the evening did start
a plethoras of feeling seized my heart
my pride burned fiercely, as things began
without hesitation, I turned my back and ran...
crap
hole
Kneeling
constipation
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~The purpose of the ninja is to flip out and kill people.
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09-01-2005, 05:36 PM
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#822 | | Senior Member
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Originally Posted by fencerontheline crap
hole
Kneeling
constipation | I just want to state right now, that you are a sick, sick person.
The constipation of the city, comes to a single slum
Kneeling in the crap, I feel my heart begin to numb
This hole of humanity, this void of emotion
Still brings a brutal passion, a savage devotion.
Quite.
Remember.
Egregious.
Eternity.
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09-02-2005, 12:01 PM
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#823 | | Senior Member
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| Remember your heros, a wise sage once said
whether the hero is alive, or that hero be dead
They fight egregious villians, tis quite a task to see
their payment... they endure in our hearts, from now til eternity
Saberuse
Lush
Hangover
Dogface
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If a little dreaming is dangerous, the cure for it is not to dream less but to dream more, to dream all the time~Proust
~The purpose of the ninja is to flip out and kill people.
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09-17-2005, 06:08 PM
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#824 | | Senior Member
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Originally Posted by fencerontheline Saberuse
Lush
Hangover
Dogface | *Sigh*
Being a lush doesn't save me from this
But in my hangover state, it's pure bliss.
My saberuse vision is blurry, a blessing in disguise
Then your dogface starts to clear, and I want to gouge out my eyes.
Drastic.
Conciliate.
Salacious.
Ebullient.
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09-17-2005, 09:38 PM
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#825 | | Senior Member
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| I know, it's always me and Dote ruining your thread. I'm sorry.
__________________ "What, really? I thought that song was just about a dragon who lived by the sea and frolicked in the autumn mist in a land called Honah Lee."
"Dan, you're such a dumb*ss"
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09-17-2005, 09:50 PM
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| Wouldn't it be "Dote and I"???
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If a little dreaming is dangerous, the cure for it is not to dream less but to dream more, to dream all the time~Proust
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09-18-2005, 12:22 AM
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| ...case in point, Mike.
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09-18-2005, 12:30 AM
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| What are you doing siding with him? The last thing you want to give Dote is confidence in himself. Then... well you know what happens... 
__________________ "What, really? I thought that song was just about a dragon who lived by the sea and frolicked in the autumn mist in a land called Honah Lee."
"Dan, you're such a dumb*ss"
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09-18-2005, 05:03 AM
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| I get frisky and naked???
P.S.
I had one too many drinks tonight at a party via Alex Kao, so please excuse my misspellings and rudeness... I'll surely regret this post in the morning, so please, allow me to revel in my stupidly induced stupor for now. I'll face my punishment tomorrow when I shall read this post and know how foolish Jack makes me.
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If a little dreaming is dangerous, the cure for it is not to dream less but to dream more, to dream all the time~Proust
~The purpose of the ninja is to flip out and kill people.
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09-18-2005, 05:10 AM
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Originally Posted by fencerontheline I get frisky and naked???
P.S.
I had one too many drinks tonight at a party via Alex Kao, so please excuse my misspellings and rudeness... I'll surely regret this post in the morning, so please, allow me to revel in my stupidly induced stupor for now. I'll face my punishment tomorrow when I shall read this post and know how foolish Jack makes me. | I have quoted this just so that you can find this next time you drink and post. Even if you have ashamedly delete it later.
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09-18-2005, 12:32 PM
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| haha, I can't delete it, it's been over 2 hours. I kinda did this on-purpose.
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If a little dreaming is dangerous, the cure for it is not to dream less but to dream more, to dream all the time~Proust
~The purpose of the ninja is to flip out and kill people.
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09-18-2005, 01:11 PM
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Originally Posted by fencerontheline I know, it's always me and Dote ruining your thread. | Quote: |
Originally Posted by fencerontheline Wouldn't it be "Dote and I"??? | Even in a drunken stupor, remember this simple trick for these kinds of questions: remove the other person, and try out the personal pronoun alone.
As in: "It's always I ruining your thread" sounds wrong, while: "It's always me ruining your thread" is happier. Generally, though, the person is named first, as in "Dote and me." Is that order a hard and fast grammar rule? Dunno. Maybe Peach and I can talk about it in a later post.
See how easy it is?
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09-18-2005, 02:03 PM
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#833 | | Senior Member
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| Hungover, and bound to make a mistake, so feel free to cut in....
I'm well aware of this rule and this trick, even during my darkest, drunkest and most stupid hours.
"I know, it's always me and Dote ruining your thread." doesn't sound quite correct, when you remove the Dote (As many tried last night. Alas, I was quite stubborn in my unconsciousness).
"It is alway me ruining your thread" doesn't sound correct because you are using the passive voice. Naughty, Naughty, Naughty... Didn't they teach you anything in Stuy?
Perhaps a better way to say it would be "I am always the one to ruin your thread", which can be changed to: "Dote and I, are always the ones to ruin your thread. Using the active voice in writing allows you make a point in a more coherent manner.
~Mike
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If a little dreaming is dangerous, the cure for it is not to dream less but to dream more, to dream all the time~Proust
~The purpose of the ninja is to flip out and kill people.
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09-18-2005, 02:34 PM
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#834 | | Senior Member
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| You're a schmuck, but right. You should see my essays during a spell check.
Passive voice (consider revising).
Passive voice (consider revising).
Passive voice (consider revising).
Passive voice (consider revising).
Alright, threadjack over. Continue with poetry.
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"Dan, you're such a dumb*ss"
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09-18-2005, 02:50 PM
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#835 | | Curmudgeon-in-Chief
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Originally Posted by Capt. Slo-mo As in: "It's always I ruining your thread" sounds wrong, while: "It's always me ruining your thread" is happier. | Make the sentence as complete as possible:
"It's always I who am ruining your thread"
or
"It's always me who am ruining your thread".
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Meanwhile, Quote:
Drastic.
Conciliate.
Salacious.
Ebullient.
| The cannibal said "The conciliate"
"Wasn't that drastic?" inquired the legate.
The houri was lost in salacious debate
With Mae West and the Bishop ( ebullient curate ).
Coruscant
Crapulous
Garters
Defenestration
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09-23-2005, 03:24 PM
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| Coruscant garters and low cut shirts
Crapulous drinkers that always get hurt
If only they didn't keep their hands where they belong
Then the defenestration wouldn't be so wrong.
Blah. You threw me off a little with 'defenestration'.
Mordant.
Pallid.
Unruly.
Impasse.
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09-25-2005, 01:29 AM
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| And the battle begins...
Your mordant poetry is quite crass
The pallid prose has no style
You writiting is a lyrical ****pile
It's unruly verse has reached quite an impasse
stop now, pucker up and kiss my ***
Weiner
Jamba
Mason
Dixie
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If a little dreaming is dangerous, the cure for it is not to dream less but to dream more, to dream all the time~Proust
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09-25-2005, 01:51 AM
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Originally Posted by fencerontheline Weiner
Jamba
Mason
Dixie | You weinerless pathetic fool
You're ignorant. You don't know dixie
Jamba your way back to mason city
You effeminate little pixie.
Here, since you're obviously challenged in the head, I'll even give you easy words.
Flowing.
Placid.
Illicit.
Meander.
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09-29-2005, 06:04 AM
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Originally Posted by Saber-Psycho Flowing.
Placid.
Illicit.
Meander. | The placid river
Meanders by your bower
of illicit love.
Dote
Psycho
conflagration
Semtex
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09-29-2005, 10:00 PM
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#840 | | Curmudgeon-in-Chief
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Originally Posted by sabreur The placid river
Meanders by your bower
of illicit love.
| You left out "flowing".
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