10-03-2004, 07:29 PM
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Originally Posted by HillBilly Jock
Devil
Fred
Fetish | There's a devil somewhere in all of us,
Even if you ride with the jocks on the bus.
If you're Fred or John, you still have the seed.
If you have a fetish or defect you just shouldn't lead.
There's something very wrong with that......
Relish.
Volcano.
Reciprocate.
Acne.
And of course that's what I meant......
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10-04-2004, 02:21 PM
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| A DQ Relish Volcano
The acned teen presented
I just couldn’t keep down
The reciprocate emesis emitted
Yes. Gross.
Tribal
Vision
Shrug
Born
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10-04-2004, 02:27 PM
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| Sorry for messing up the format...
The tribal remnants of our being
that vision of how we truly are
one not of what we are seeing
the truth of how we feel is better by far.
Truth is a burden that none can shrug
our humanity is a burden that we must lug.
We are all born as people, just the same.
And we continue on, and we live the human game
Dance
Steel
Fire
Cold
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10-04-2004, 02:57 PM
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| That deadly, deadly, dance.
I felt the cold steel run me thru.
I felt weakness suffusing my stance.
There is no fire in my fight, what can I do?
D@mn I hate losing.....
Corroboate.
Cryptic.
Contentious.
Constraint.
And thank you Army, I'll never be able to eat at Dairy Queen again. 
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10-04-2004, 06:40 PM
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| Why the contentious constraint?
I detest the box in which you force me.
My peers don’t corroborate my complaint,
Cryptic acquiesce returned for thinking free.
If one more professor tells me "That's beyond the scope of this course," I think I'm going to run someone through.
Bull
Lumen
Thought
Forlorn
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10-04-2004, 11:49 PM
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| For some reason I'm feeling quite forlorn.
I need my thoughts to be adorned.
My head feels like a punctured a lumen.
This is bull. I need to act more human.
Dysfunctional.
Severe.
Chips.
Poem.
Awwww. It's okay Army! Bear with them. The college teachers will catch up with you, in time. 
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10-05-2004, 12:02 AM
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| This dysfunctional dream that we mantain
this severe risks that we live
all of our chips in, to lose all or to gain
our life as a poem, our soul to give
wanderlust
trial
social
profound
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10-05-2004, 12:18 AM
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| The wanderlust is so profound.
But my case is going to trial.
These proceedings have no grounds.
These social butterflies have no style.
Reference.
Match.
Sharpie.
Flashlight.
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10-05-2004, 06:53 AM
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| Aside: I notice that everyone seems to be using meter and rhyme. So much for the "blank verse IS TOO poetry" theory, I guess. ) | |
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10-05-2004, 10:57 AM
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| C'mon, Inq, chime in with some poetry! | |
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10-05-2004, 09:30 PM
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| ... and not witty puns  Quote: |
Originally Posted by Saber-Psycho Reference.
Match.
Sharpie.
Flashlight. | He writes with a sharpie
by the light of a match
He see's with a flashlight
When referencing right
Lois
Hostel
Juniper
Flora
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10-06-2004, 04:34 PM
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| Beneath the shade of the wild juniper tree,
Lois asked of me, “What do you think is the easiest
way to die?”
..............“In a French hostel, underwhelmed
by bacterial flora. Or maybe cor pulmonale.”
(My indentations don't show up right.  )
Sickle
Wait
Imagine
Dank
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10-06-2004, 04:43 PM
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| BTW... Some of this poetry has been very good, so I've been giving out a lot of rep points in this thread. New people need to contribute so I can give out more!
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10-06-2004, 05:15 PM
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| In misery dank
He will wait
He can only imagine,
The sickle, his fate
Heartbreak
Joy
Green
Blue | |
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10-06-2004, 05:17 PM
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| It was such a dank and dismal night.
That sickle moon producing so little light.
I could not imagine the day break ahead.
Waiting for dissolute tears to be shed.
Heresy.
Exhaustive.
Exonerate.
Verbose.
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10-06-2004, 05:29 PM
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| Dangit!!!!!! Soldier beat me!!!!!!!! 
Fine. I'll do your words too.
Heartbreak always leaves you blue.
Joy almost never accommodates you.
You're green if that's all you believe.
Why wear your heart on a sleeve?
Heresy.
Exhaustive.
Exonerate.
Verbose.
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10-06-2004, 08:13 PM
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| No puns, you say?
Heresy!
Verse? Too exhaustive
For me.
Exonerate my poor attempt
At poetry,
And perhaps less verbose
I'll be.
Condign
Abrogate
Carillon
Cwm | |
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10-06-2004, 08:48 PM
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| Sitting in the cwm
The wind as a carillon
A condign decision to contemplate
Whether his life to abrogate
Denizen
Salubrious
Rapprochemont
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10-06-2004, 11:30 PM
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| --not participating as of right now--
Abulia's been used, matey...
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10-07-2004, 12:14 AM
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| There've been a lot of reused words. If it's good, run with it!
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