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**alexisdafencer** · 08-01-2004 12:25 PM

a can join, and since i'm not totally sure this will be a good one, you ppls plz help me to make it good, ima 12 yr old fencer, first thing is firstt though, write a paragraph or two about your character (where he/she lives, why s/he is leaving home, does s/he know where s/he is going?, does s/he have any magical powers/ friennds (NOTHING THAT CAN MAKE THEM INVICIBLE) (like yes little orb things,little dragons (about 4 ft at the shoulder), faerie...
no, the sword of invincibility, non peircable armor unless there is a weak point somewhere, raybeams out of eyes

can form alliances, enemies (enemies for story purposes), etc
this is on the super fantasy side. well, anyone wanna join?

**Iwant2bafencer** · 08-01-2004 02:06 PM

Erm . . . Say what?

**Darion McNair** · 08-01-2004 04:00 PM

I would try for an intelligent response, but since you can't come up with an intelligent question, why bother?

**Moonitic** · 08-01-2004 05:00 PM

Ok, first of all, go back & proofread your post. Fix the spelling errors. Then, add commas &, more importantly, periods. Maybe a question mark or two if you're asking a question. Being 12 isn't an excuse for such poor grammatical skills. If you really want help to write something, you have to start with your own writing issues.

**Swordsman** · 08-01-2004 08:52 PM

And, by the way, "n00b" is an exceedingly obnoxious term that I would prefer be saved for the geeky gaming forums from whence it came.

**Zelda** · 08-02-2004 08:20 AM

You have the gist, but I would do as Moonitic suggested and maybe try to edit your post a bit. We dont use many net abbreviations in here, as it drives some of us (me in particular) a tad batty. But yes, make a character up, tell us a bit of thier history and we will do all we can to help you WONT WE GUYS??? (insert stern look to board regulars here)

**alexisdafencer** · 08-02-2004 12:42 PM

Well, I was trying to type fast. I'm not a fast typer.

**alexisdafencer** · 08-02-2004 01:02 PM

"Hello?," said Misty as she moved slowly throuh the humid forest.She could sense something watching her.RIght behind her, something swished through the under brush.She kept moving on,startling at the smallest sound, alert for her pursuer.Well, she thought,if I don't make camp for tonight, and if whatever that is comes, I'll be fit for nothing, much less try to fight it.Misty kept moving until she found a likely place.A large old tree had beenslowly pulling itself up out of the ground, and formed a cavelike crevice with its roots. she took flint and tinder and started to make a fire.as the fire got hot enough, she made a soup with her meager supplys.As she slept, she dreamt about all the things that had happened to her.She had run from her peasent parents home,taken her fathers blade, andsome food.It was that king that had made his people live in such poverty.her family had been almost royalty before King Apodemus had died.now an evil tyrant ruled.that was the last thing she thought of before she went to sleep from sheer fatigue. (so, what do you think?)

**Crin Dalmeiier** · 08-05-2004 03:11 PM

Wow. Webspeak.

No thanks.

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Forum Fantasy and Swordplay Fantasy Land mostly for n00bs Closed Thread Results 1 to 9 of 9 Thread: mostly for n00bs Thread Tools Show Printable Version Email this Page… Subscribe to this Thread… Display Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode 08-01-2004 12:25 PM #1 alexisdafencer Just Joined Array Join Date Jul 2004 Location planet fencing Posts 12 mostly for n00bs a can join, and since i'm not totally sure this will be a good one, you ppls plz help me to make it good, ima 12 yr old fencer, first thing is firstt though, write a paragraph or two about your character (where he/she lives, why s/he is leaving home, does s/he know where s/he is going?, does s/he have any magical powers/ friennds (NOTHING THAT CAN MAKE THEM INVICIBLE) (like yes little orb things,little dragons (about 4 ft at the shoulder), faerie... no, the sword of invincibility, non peircable armor unless there is a weak point somewhere, raybeams out of eyes can form alliances, enemies (enemies for story purposes), etc this is on the super fantasy side. well, anyone wanna join? all shall bow down to the REAL ruler of earth. ME!!! Mua ha ha ha!!! contact me with your pitiful worries and woes here (or just talk to the supreme ruler as you bow down) ps mua ha ha! pps mua mua ha ha ha ha!! ppps hahahahaha!!! News reporter asks me "what are you going to do now?" "I'm goin to rule the univers as soon as I get my spaceship drivers license! mua ha ha ha ha!!!!" 08-01-2004 02:06 PM #2 Iwant2bafencer Senior Member Array Join Date Jul 2001 Location The great U.S.ofA. Posts 1,367 Erm . . . Say what? "Wars may be fought with weapons, but they are won by men. It is the spirit of men who follow and of the man who leads that gains the victory." - George S. Patton 08-01-2004 04:00 PM #3 Darion McNair Just Joined Array Join Date May 2002 Location USA Posts 23 I would try for an intelligent response, but since you can't come up with an intelligent question, why bother? "We have much to say about this, but it is hard to explain because you are slow to understand." Hebrews 5:11 08-01-2004 05:00 PM #4 Moonitic Senior Member Array Join Date Feb 2000 Location Michigan Posts 1,273 Ok, first of all, go back & proofread your post. Fix the spelling errors. Then, add commas &, more importantly, periods. Maybe a question mark or two if you're asking a question. Being 12 isn't an excuse for such poor grammatical skills. If you really want help to write something, you have to start with your own writing issues. "Words are, of course, the most powerful drug used by mankind." -- Rudyard Kipling 08-01-2004 08:52 PM #5 Swordsman Senior Member Array Join Date May 2001 Posts 704 And, by the way, "n00b" is an exceedingly obnoxious term that I would prefer be saved for the geeky gaming forums from whence it came. It is the soldier, not the reporter, who has given us the freedom of the press. It is the soldier, not the poet, who has given us the freedom of speech. It is the soldier, not the campus organizer, who gives us the freedom to demonstrate. It is the soldier who salutes the flag, who serves beneath the flag, and whose coffin is draped by the flag, who allows the protestor to burn the flag. - Father Dennis Edward O'Brien, USMC 08-02-2004 08:20 AM #6 Zelda Senior Member Array Join Date Feb 1999 Location Australia - various Posts 2,775 You have the gist, but I would do as Moonitic suggested and maybe try to edit your post a bit. We dont use many net abbreviations in here, as it drives some of us (me in particular) a tad batty. But yes, make a character up, tell us a bit of thier history and we will do all we can to help you WONT WE GUYS??? (insert stern look to board regulars here) Theses are evil....VERY evil, someone rescue me pls! 08-02-2004 12:42 PM #7 alexisdafencer Just Joined Array Join Date Jul 2004 Location planet fencing Posts 12 Well, I was trying to type fast. I'm not a fast typer. all shall bow down to the REAL ruler of earth. ME!!! Mua ha ha ha!!! contact me with your pitiful worries and woes here (or just talk to the supreme ruler as you bow down) ps mua ha ha! pps mua mua ha ha ha ha!! ppps hahahahaha!!! News reporter asks me "what are you going to do now?" "I'm goin to rule the univers as soon as I get my spaceship drivers license! mua ha ha ha ha!!!!" 08-02-2004 01:02 PM #8 alexisdafencer Just Joined Array Join Date Jul 2004 Location planet fencing Posts 12 My Character "Hello?," said Misty as she moved slowly throuh the humid forest.She could sense something watching her.RIght behind her, something swished through the under brush.She kept moving on,startling at the smallest sound, alert for her pursuer.Well, she thought,if I don't make camp for tonight, and if whatever that is comes, I'll be fit for nothing, much less try to fight it.Misty kept moving until she found a likely place.A large old tree had beenslowly pulling itself up out of the ground, and formed a cavelike crevice with its roots. she took flint and tinder and started to make a fire.as the fire got hot enough, she made a soup with her meager supplys.As she slept, she dreamt about all the things that had happened to her.She had run from her peasent parents home,taken her fathers blade, andsome food.It was that king that had made his people live in such poverty.her family had been almost royalty before King Apodemus had died.now an evil tyrant ruled.that was the last thing she thought of before she went to sleep from sheer fatigue. (so, what do you think?) all shall bow down to the REAL ruler of earth. ME!!! Mua ha ha ha!!! contact me with your pitiful worries and woes here (or just talk to the supreme ruler as you bow down) ps mua ha ha! pps mua mua ha ha ha ha!! ppps hahahahaha!!! News reporter asks me "what are you going to do now?" "I'm goin to rule the univers as soon as I get my spaceship drivers license! mua ha ha ha ha!!!!" 08-05-2004 03:11 PM #9 Crin Dalmeiier Member Array Join Date Nov 2002 Location Vagrant Posts 47 Wow. Webspeak. No thanks. I've got a theory. It could be bunnies. Proud to be serving as the Official Class Clown of the Seven. Closed Thread « Previous Thread \| Next Thread » Posting Permissions You may not post new threads You may not post replies You may not post attachments You may not edit your posts BB code is On Smilies are On [IMG] code is Off HTML code is Off Trackbacks are On Pingbacks are On Refbacks are On Forum Rules Contact Us Fencing.Net Archive Top All times are GMT -4. 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